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guys im being really lazy. and i have no idea when ima get off my ass, but ill do it soon

*pokes Nakama*  do it~

Any comments on my guy or was I rejected entirely?

KennyMan666 wrote:

Alternatively, there's nothing inherently wrong with having two crew members that can fill the same position. You could even work out some backstory between the two of you, being a cook duo or something.

I'm cool with that

KennyMan666 wrote:

Also, Trace, the problem I have with your character is that the description of his appearance just screams "SANJI" to me. Apart from that, it's nice, except for that devil fruits are consistently described as tasting terrible, so I don't really buy that. Unless he's lying about it.

Yeah I noticed that after reading, so I was trying hard to make it sound less like him as possible.
And yeah the devil fruit thing tasting nice is a lie that he denies, I should have put that in >.>

Last edited by Captain Trace (2010-07-02 16:02:31)

I guess it's a case of adjusting a few bits and pieces or somehow work it that he idolises Sanji so it's not an issue he's trying to act similarly or something. Any tips?

ALRIGHT, im starting it, and i think ill just get silent to come in after, who do i want with me... hmm
Myself, Steve and Kennyman! also i still need a captain

Nakama wrote:

ALRIGHT, im starting it, and i think ill just get silent to come in after, who do i want with me... hmm
Myself, Steve and Kennyman! also i still need a captain

...did you, like, completely miss the fact that I created Rink to be the captain?

Heh to be fair I can understand if she comes off as being supposed to be the musician from that description. Which is partly true, but while she can play some instruments, she's mainly a singer.

I'll probably post after I've slept, it's too late for me to be creative enough right now.

There we go. Let's get this show on the road.

probably 2 on the next island. i danno


EDIT: i know my post is short, but i didn't want to powerplay rink too much

Last edited by Nakama (2010-07-03 13:46:17)

I made another post, just so that Derik is off and Rink is alone again. This could mean steve's character could meet with her, or something like that. It's short, sorry again xD

Note to selves. Always open it in another window and refresh before posting just in case.....

Name : Nasya Nori
Position : Thief, strategist
Occupation : Con-artist / Priest
Age : 24
Appearance : She is mostly seen wearing the robes of various religions and cultures. Her blonde hair is kept short and barley grazes her shoulders but she is most proud of her eyes which are as green as the sea, standing at around 5'6 this gives her a look that takes most peoples minds off what she is really up to.

Bio :

Born on a small Island in the West Blue Nori grew up on, around or in the farms. She grew up fast and soon grew bored of the small Island and everyone knowing each other, there was no escape for her. When a group of priests stopped in on the Island for the harvest service she stowed away on their boat and left to become a member of the church.

Once there her life took a turn for the worse. The priests never accepted her and soon "sent her off into the world", which to Nori took to mean never come back, why arguing against certain beliefs was allowed but proving it wasn't she never understood. Nori was sent into the world at the age of 15 with only a Staff, robes and the good book. But the honey moon period was soon over. After growing tired of always being poor Nori soon fell in with the street kids where she learnt some of the more dirty tricks of her trade, Nori took to becoming a pretty thief but when caught by the marines she turned back to the cloth and was an icon in the prison and soon released after 'finding a new path'.

Nori was now 17 and hated the marines and the inside of a prison. She took to travelling and became a con-artist. Preaching for the masses while at the same time robbing them half blind, she never left them with nothing unless they deserved it. Nori constantly changed her name and no one ever found out, who would suspect a respectable priest of stealing. After about a year of this she had amassed a large saving but had lost the thrill of just stealing for the sake of it and took to helping causes, robbing pirates blind and leaving the riches with some small backwater town who needed supplies brought back the thrill but made her closer to danger.

Nori retired from the world for a while and fell back into the church but after seeing so much grew bored of being civilised and took to wandering the seas on civilian ships staying where she like and doing what she needed to get by and if times grew hard she fell back onto the church for help.

It was on one of her wanderings that she came into contact with pirates in a battle sense rather than just to rob and con them. The transport she was on had been targeted for anything she held including the ship itself. Some young upstart pirate had started to want his own fleet and wasn't willing to pay for them. After knocking three of the boarders unconscious Nori was finally disarmed by the first mate of the pirates and taken to see the captain. He introduced himself as Captain Charles Vane of the Storm Pirates, and was asked to join. Nori joined up with them but under the name Miracle. She was soon trusted by most of the crew as both a Preacher, giving peace to crew and foes alike and with her knowledge of thievery and crime. She quickly rose to the rank of first mate under Captain Vane, but Miracle was now a wanted name but without a face, gaining a small bounty under the Storm Pirates she soon relished the rush of being hunted in every port by marines and bounty hunters alike. It wasn't long before Vane and his fleet decided to leave West Blue and head for the Line and try their luck there. As they left the final port making the run for reverse mountain Nori watched from the dockside slightly soured by the fact that her crew for the past two years had now abandoned her for saying they weren't ready. A week later it was announced that they had been killed in a three was fight between pirates and marines. After the news she left the name Miracle and the Island behind and set off to find another crew.

Last edited by Xioe (2010-07-04 15:39:29)

Alright, that'll have to do for now. I might touch that up a bit later on. "Or, more accurately..." is quickly becoming Rink's catchphrase, lol.

Now, bed.