You are not logged in.
pretty cool man
that multiple sword fighting style really caught my attention
i can imagine him fighting, and quickly changing sword
also he can evolve by finding other swords or developing the breath of all things
good character dude
the only downside, is that he doesnt really has a job on the crew, not that he needs to (Zoro)(Robin)
For the rest writing your storys
I know its hard thinking devil fruits, because there are so many right now on the series
but you just have to take regular objects and combine them, there also many abiltys that havent b
een used or you can create one for paramecian users
zoan types are even easier, take an animal and cobine them with you
now the other types can be harsh because they are elements and very powerfull, dont recommend this one
but if you find something that is in the boundarys of normal strenght (remember if you have a chance of defeating goku, you over did it)
PS: Aokiji could take goku anytime, as enel and smoker
Last edited by Omega_D_ (2006-06-04 17:18:45)
Hey is it okay to make another post if you don't like Olleiene?
Weapons: needles, spears, swords
Appearance: He has red eyes and he wears a brown robe with a brown cap all the time he towers about about 6'3 tall. Has a slightly long hair that goes down to his neck, hair is very crumpled and does not comb himself much often. He wears brown robes while his entire body is covered with bandages. He is pale skinned and looks like a maniac.
Bakgroiund: Oznerol grew up in the village famous for their unholy cults and voodoo practices. It was said in the village that to spare their lives from the marines who had been invading them a sacrifice was to be made in order to summon the great spirits and destroy the marine fleet. One day Oznerol was the one to be sacrificed to the marines, the cultists held out their daggers into the air getting ready to stab the 8 year old boy and pour its blood on the altar when the marines suddenly attacked. The entire sacrifice was cancelled. The cultists and the voodoo practitioners were then arrested and Oznerol the sacrificed boy was sent into a rehabilitation center coz he had lost his mind. Three years later it was found out that everyone in the institution where Oznerol was admitted were brutally massacred by an evil Pirate named Alleane who attacked the institution. The mysterious Pirate Alleane liked to have crazy people as his soldiers coz crazy people do not hesitate in killing and were real monsters in a battle. Alleane saw the beaten up crazy kid in the floor gasping for breath, then Alleane stretched out his hands to Oznerol.
"Do you want to come with me and live young man?" Alleane asked the dying boy
There was no reply from the kid. Something you would expect from a madman. The only thing that Alleane heard was the boys longing for food. The doctors in the instituion haven't given him anything to eat. "I'm hungry". He said.
Because of Alleanes wacked out mind, he had the freaking idea to give the boy a Devil Fruit. Alleane gave the boy some food to eat. Then he took tried to take the boy and train him as his soldier, a personal soldier who has no feelings and kills without hesitation. But the marines had come to reinforce them after that, Alleane escaped and Oznerol was shot a tenmes in his body. The marines thought that Oznerol was dead so they left the little boy along in the ruins, his blood all over the floors of the mental institution. When the marines had got out Oznerol lived coz of his DF powers. The shots gave Oznerol his sanity back, but Oznerol knew little about life. He barely even knew how to speak, nor did he know his origin. He was like a baby who knew nothing of the world.
Turned out that a bunch of pirates who were looting from the ruins found him. THey taught him many skills in fighting and they soon found out that Oznerol had DevilFruit powers. Oznerol never knew where he got the powers. Because Oznerol grew up from pirates he had was bloodthirsty and brutal who loved to see bloodshed and death.
But the pirates that he was working for were soon arrested and killed by the marines. He who had served with the pirates was then turned into the marines. And was imprisoned along with his other piratecrewmates. In the marine jail, the marines found out that Alleane was like a dog, who obeyed his masters commandsand had very less confident in himself. So the marines turned him to a soldier.
Oznerol was too bloodthirsty and the marines did not like his attiitude, he had stayed with pirates too long. But the marines could not kill him since they would be arrested by the world goverment if they did it so they marrooned Oznerol into an island. Oznerol obeyed every command the marines gave him, he even obeyed to jump into the water and swim to an unknown island. But Oznerol did not know how to swin coz of DF, luckily the waves brought him to a huge island known as Toraki. And that's where our story starts.
Cpmvat: DF Blood Blood Fruit: I am able to control blood in my body and use them as ways of wielding my weapons. My blood can also enter to my enemies's body and rupture their veins. Only problem is when I lose that much blood I cannot breathe and die.
Spear Death: When Oznerol throws a spear that is soaked in his blood he is able to let drops of blood sneak to the target if the spear is unable to hit.
Hell Needle: Throws a bunch of needles to his enemies into the air, then the needles drop to the ground in a scatter making it rain needles.
Cardiac Rupture: Oznerol lets his blood sneak into his enemies hearts then stops the flow of blood in it. His enemies won't be able to breathe because of it.
Reversed Impale: Impales a target from its head to the butt with a spear.
Spear Connection: Oznerol uses his blood to connect spears together making them more longer
Only answers to the command of his superiors, always on the neutral side. Does not hesitate a command given to him, just does it and shows no affection when he battles, always giving a wicked grin that makes people think of him as a crazed maniac. Does not laugh during jokes and funny situations, but he does laugh (and what a crazed laugh it is) in brutal sitautions and massacres. Loves to see bloodshed.
His goal is to know something about his origin.
Last edited by lorenzo (2006-06-04 20:45:43)
Lorenzo <> Oznerol....
whatever, I actually posted to warn you Crimson said he didn't want decypher posts and you bia seems to be filled with typos.
Anyways Elisa is in the making and I already found an position no one seems to have taken: Captain
Damn I forgot, okay I'll put in my last character post. I'll make it short
Weapons: swords, spears, rifles, pistols and grenades
Appearance: He has blue eyes filled with enthusiasm and focus that is similar to that of an eagle. His eyebags appear rather large and makes him look a person that is very weary. His built is very average since he heights about 5 feet ten. His weight is abbout 120 pounds. He wears a bunch of loose blue pajamas that are designed with stars and moons. He has three spears strapped in his back a sword on his waist and some hidden pistols on his sleeves.
Bakgroiund: Oznerol was the son of a rich marine general (father) and a rich sea trader (mom). He spent most of his life in the huge mansion that he lived in. His father wanted him to become a great marine that will someday become even more stronger than any marine his father had known before. His father and his mother paid good money for his private marine trainings using a sword.
Despite the advanced swordsmanship training Oznerol got from the marines Oznerols skills in fights only improved little. He always had the lowest grades in his swordplay schools. That's coz Oznerol is a lazy bastard who loves nothing but fun and rest. Work is the last thing that comes in his mind.
One day Oznerol's parents was brutally murdered by a pirate who attacked their beloved mansion and came to loot their money. The pirates name was Alleane the terrible, His mother and his father died defending their treasure and defending him from the terrible Alleane. Oznerol on the other hand was too frightened to fight. Still he was able to see the terrible face of the pirate who had murdered his family.
Alleane was unable to steal their money because the marines had arrived suddenly for reinforcements. But the death of Oznerols parents could not be altered. Oznerol vowed to take revenge, he would use all money he had to find and kill Alleane. THat was before he found that the goverment would mortgaage their property.
Alleane was left with nothing alone after that except for revenge. He stole his own money from his own house and soon found himself wanted by the marines for stealing his own mothers and father jewelry worth 100 million berri.
Oznerol after that became a pirate to travel the seas and look for Alleane. He used all money he had to buy weapons and a small ship.
Comvat: Oznerol may have been a lazy bastard but he does remember a little about his trainings in the marines.
Poisoned Sword: Oznerol uses a sword that is soaked in poison, coz he does not fight that good he uses many unfair things to win a battle.
IttoRyu(ONE HAND SWORD STYLE) + Pistol sneak attack: While holding his sword in his right arm for a swing, Oznerol makes it a fake and suddenly a pistol comes out of his pajama's sleeves to make a kill.
Flashbang: Ya u know this already in CS
Flying spear strike:This is Oznerols great technique that he made up on his own. When Oznerol strikes with his spear he does it in a leaping motion while holding the shaft of the spear on its tip making the offense very long and hard to block.
Impaling Strike:With combined forces of Oznerol's chi his spear is able to pierce through metal.
Grenades: Yeah im sure you know this also
Smoke |Grenade|: Oznerol wears a gasmask as he throws his smoke grenades so that he wont be seen by his enemies.
Oznerol looks like a dumb guy who knows nothing in life. But looks can be deceiving. Oznerol is always stating moral and gentlemanly lines. His attitude is very childish and selfish. He always likes to have fun in the ship and make fun or jokes with his nakama when he is bored. Oznerol not only serves as the ships look-out he also serves as a diplomat becoz he once belonged to a rich family. Oznerol eats with pure ethics. He looks pretty childish and also acts like one for his age.
His goal in life is to find and kill Alleane.
Alright, I was thinking of doing another RP, but the recent ones haven't been so promising, grammar wise. Your's however, gets my vote! Here's a character I have been thinking of today, and will make my own art of her sooner or later.
Role: Hunter-type/Battle Strategist
Combat: Specialized Spear-fighting
Body type:Lean with strong, toned muscles
Tevai is a generally imposing woman. At an astonishing 6'1, she has a dark-skinned complexion, deep yellow eyes and light green hair. Her top hair is weaved into something similar to cornrows, while five of those cornrows stick out diagonally and up from the back of her head ,as they are tied tight with darker green ribbons. The hair on the side of her head is not shaped into cornrows, but falls naturally into flat, rectangular strands.
Tevai usually wears her traditional clothing of something that resembles a mix of a native person from a tropical Oceania island (think Fiji or New Guinea) and Africa, and normally bears her midriff, arms and legs. She also tends to wear a lot of piercings on her face, ears, and belly button, as it is a tradition to get one or more on each birthday from the age of 16. She also has a small, yet wide scar that crosses the bridge of her nose, and is lighter in color compared to the rest of her skin.
She also wears a round, golden pendant all the time, which is her family heirloom and protects it with her life. The front of the pendant resembles some sort of tree while the back has scratches on it.
Tevai was born on an island very close to the Grand Line in the South Blue, as it is pratically summer every day. Similar to our Savannahs, it is highly populated with animals and fewer people, with little technology. Tevai's people prefers the use of arrows, spears and axes, but utilize the few guns and swords the "find" on trespassing ships. As the child, she, like the rest of the children, were taught how to stalk and hunt down prey as if they were animals themselves, as they too will have to support their families someday. However, they also had to learn self-control, for if they hunted too much, it would ruin the balance of the island, and through lore, the last time that happened, disasterous things occured.
Tevai was known in the village to learn how be a proficient hunter at a young age, because she had an unnatural talent to act like any animal she wanted to. At first, it was for playing around, but as she got older she transformed her playing into hunting methods and attacks, as she then realized there is no better hunters than the animals themselves. Combined with her special spear "Takehebi" (Bamboo-serpent), and years of hunting experience, her fighting ability is to be feared.
Just a year ago, when Tevai was 25, a certain group of Marines discovered her isolated island and began hunting animals for their furs and meat, without the natives knowing. Because the island was so large, and because her people were on the opposite end, they were unaware of the atrocities the selfish Marines were doing that night. Within that short period, the Marines wiped out a significant amount of animals, as it was easy for them with their guns and took what they wanted and left. The next morning, to the horror of Tevai all there was on that side of the island were carcasses of animals and a Marine coat someone forgot. Furious, she returned home to gather all her things and say her goodbyes, and left the island for the first time, with the Marine Coat as the only clue of her next prey.
Combat relevant info:
Every one of her attacks involves her taking a particular stance that resembles an animal, and a spear that can dislocate itself at several points and can extend or retract. The spear has a hard stone at the tip that is as sharp as obsidian and hard as steel. The shaft is made of six pieces of a very hard wood reinforced with brokend gun barrels, leaving a hollow center that a strong rope is looped through. If Tevai gives the rope slack, the spear can become loose and extend or even encircle itself, acting like a whip with a sharp end and wooden coverings. If she tightens the rope, the spear regains it's original pole form. As expected, the spear is quite heavy and can be slow, but in the hands of Tevai, it's true potential is unleashed.
Tevai is a no-nonsense kind of person, and takes everything seriously as if she is always on the hunt. She only smiles whenever the occassion calls for it (like a party); otherwise, it is gloom and doom for anybody who rubs her the wrong way. In battle, she always thinks two step ahead to gain the advantage over her enemies, which are mostly the Marines, the focus of her revenge for her island animals. She has a nasty habit of appearing out of nowhere, like a panther silently jumping out of the bushes, and tends to unintentially scare people this way.
Also, being of an animist nature, she is kinda superstitious when it comes to certain things and gets annoyed when she is proved wrong. In fact, she gets easily annoyed because her straight-laced attitude, and can be so annoyed that her reactions become exaggerated and comical, which is something she rarely acts.
Last edited by Smartz118 (2006-08-06 23:01:49)
If I were Crim, I'd wait a bit longer so I had more people to choose from. Not that the people we have so far are bad, but I want to give the others a chance to create some kind of character.
In the meantime, we need to advertise this part of the forum to the other sub-forums...what do you think?
If I were Crimson I would post to let us know that he's still alive, or that he's not playing one big joke on us, and was really never going to start an RP this whole time...
Last edited by Random Guy ZT (2006-06-06 23:09:25)
Alive and kicking baby. And it is as Smartz118 says, I wanna give this thing a week (meaning two more days) so everyone has had a fair chance to post a character.
Then I will decide who gets in, and who has to wait until the first crew expansion. Then the second, then the third and final. (Nine members is my limit, at which point I will have taken the RP into the Grand Line.
That's great to hear, now if you could just tell me if you recieved my PM or not...
Last edited by Random Guy ZT (2006-06-07 07:39:44)
I replied on it, so... uhm... yeah. Haven't you gotten my reply?
Can't say that I have.
MAN This is starting to get shape
we have relly good characters so far
the one im most interested in is ravona
dont know i like dark characters like that
hope chris sambia get a piece of this too (ejem ejem)
south blue adventures are going to be hard, because crimson is going to have to create some badass enemys to fight
good luck crimson
and force be with you
dont know why i have this feeling, but if chris and yake get selected, i have the impression that we will be like zoro and sanji
Oh my. Oh well. If I don't get picked, then that's okay with me.
I hav a feeling that I wont get picked.
I'll just butt in as a badass if I wo't get picked. If it's okay with Crimson.
Last edited by lorenzo (2006-06-07 19:33:03)
I'm sori Okami, but I'm not that good in ENglish. I am Pinoy after all
BakaKana: I require original characters. Your sword and moves are directly lifted from Zoro, which is a disqualifier. Re-make the moves and rename the sword, and I will reconsider.
And PLEASE EDIT THE ORIGINAL POST instead of writing a new one. I hate it when people post five different versions, it clutters up the forum and forces me to re-read the first pages every time to get the right version.
And a quirk is a trait that gives your character an unique flair. Like Luffy's eating habits, Sanji's puppy love, Zoro's sleeping habits and lack of direction-sense, Naruto's way of ending half his sentences with "dayo", Chopper's behaviour when he recieves praise, and so forth and so on.
Lorenzo: What Okami is saying is that butting in leads to people disliking the one who butts in. And yes, that is the case here. I will expand the crew at given times, giving other people a chance to join, but that is at my discretion.
Generally: If anyone still is in doubt, re-read my first post. I require a mature level of writing and behaviour. Try to be including and supportive of other players, make sure that you play your character like a PERSON, with emotions, fears, joys, likes, dislikes, rational thought (unless that is your quirk) and a some level of development.
Just so everyone knows, the positions that have yet to be applied for are Captain and Shipwright. If anyone has any ideas for any other characters, those would be the roles to fill unless you can think of anything else yourself.
I really like the group that's already listed here though. If I had it my way, the crew would go:
Ky Trier: Captain- Granted, he said that his role would be swordsman, but no one else has applied for the role of Captain yet and swordsman is pretty broad. Also, his drive to get stronger seems like a captain's aesthetic. On top of this, his character just seems like it's really well developed and thought out.
Celest Q. Fox: First Mate- Well, besides the obvious(ie. my character), if Ky Trier were captain and had to interact with a female subordinate, it could make for funny moments since according to his character's personality, he is nervous around women.
Urateke Yake: Cook- He's got a good story behind him and seems like an interesting fellow to have on board.
Revona Denton: Navigator- I really like the story she's got behind her and something about her mysterious nature just seems like it belongs in a story.
Chris Sambia: Doctor- This character just seems like he'd be a lot of fun and with my character's fighting style, there could be plenty of team up style dance combo attacks in the works. Also, whats a One Piece story without at least 1 devil fruit user?
Nelison Collie: Gunner- Though his story is vague, this guy seems like yet another interesting character that a story just shouldn't be without. His glasses quirk is also quite nice (though it reminds me of Tashigi, who reminds me of a dumb Velma).
Thats all for my vote, though it's Crimson's decision in the end.
Last edited by Okami Kugatsu (2006-06-08 02:39:57)
Okay here's my pics for who would be included.
Celeste Fox - Dancing girls are hot.
Ravona Denton-Good Story/Stressed out girl=HOT
Urateke Yake-Well he seems interesting enough. I dunno, maybe it's becoz I havent found of a good cook onboard.
Okay that's about all of it. I didn't post my character. Maybe it sucks . Maybe I suck . Nobody's been posting on "Alleane the Terrible". . Damn . Damn!! And I haven't answered anything in that topic in All Blue called "Name that Anime".
Last edited by lorenzo (2006-06-08 02:55:45)
Crimson: Hey Crimson, could you Pm your response again? I haven't recieved it and it would be nice to see what comments you have.
Okami: Yeah like I said before, I purposely leave my backstories vague for two reasons, becuase I hate writing and to avoid metagaming. Now the glasses thing was because I was tried of all these sniper characters who had "eagle eye-sight" and are the silent/totured killer type, and so I wanted to play something different and unique, and at the same time not have to resort to making an Ussop clone. Also I would like to apolgize for the one word personality despicter, but when I thought about it would hard to descibe, but I think, that if get selected, he will make people laugh, and character go, "Great our gunner's a wierdo/lunatic." or maybe not I don't know.
Last edited by Random Guy ZT (2006-06-08 09:11:21)
Random: There, if you don't get it now, I will be sad and consider you cursed. And what's with the tiny space for PMs? I have to delete them en masse on a daily basis. Guess I couldn't send the last one because the box was full.
lorenzo: (Take this however you want, it is not maliciously intended) I don't believe you would fit in very well with the rest of the guys I have on the list, and incompatability can be the end of any good RP. Thus, I will have to leave you out, as I don't think this would work very well. And making the RP work is my prime responsibility as the game-master. You seem energic and intrested, which are good qualities, and it seems you'll have plenty other RPs to attend, so don't be discouraged by my rejection.
Okay now, lemme see...
Valeron - Urateke Yake
Okami Kugatsu - Celest Q Fox
Random Guy ZT - Nelison Collie
Drachnon - Ravona Denton
Omega_D - Chris Sambia
Hanzatre - Faith D Fuuya
Loc - Ky Trier
Smartz118 - Tevai
These eight meet the prerequisites of joining, now I have to choose. I am partial to Okami's selection myself, it is balanced, interesting and seems to have potential in working together, but I want to hear from everyone during the day, telling me about your posting habits. I may base my final choices on your frequency of attending.
Got it this time. Anyways now that it's summer I can post also anytime, except for a week during late June where I'll be away, but I'll still be able to post frequently.
After next week I should be able to post several times a week if nessisary. Still I don't mind if people slightly god mod Ravona afterall it is part of her personality. Also during the vacation I will be away for a few days (I'm volunteering for Lowlands) but if I post just before I leave you probably won't even notice my absence.
I'm still in the process of writing a second bio (Elisa) in case off, though from the look of things Ravona will be included in the RP and I can't actually play both characters in the same story, I personally like Ravona better then Elisa but Elisa is more suitable for combat as well as a capable captain/leader type, which we seem to lack.