#226 2006-10-19 12:59:19

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

They're fine. After all, I am doing Maths, Further Maths and Physics at A-level.

Just so you know toenails, your character is one of the most original I've seen! War maths is ace!

Is anyone going to post next, or should I slip an introduction in here?

EDIT: Everyone's offline, so I think I'll start a small introduction.

With Tsubaki. She said she hoped to see me soon.

EDIT 2: The Exile Pirates is a good name, as Jack can never return to his home island either, as he is wanted. The reason why will be revealed.

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#227 2006-10-19 13:53:21

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

I can see where you are coming from katana master. I am not the smartest person you will ever meet, but I am very interested in this story, and for some reason naturally inclined to math and science, so I can get my feeble mind around it. Toenails, they might be hard to understand for those who are not naturally inclined to math or writing, but I see what you are saying. your posts are not as complex as they are creative. please jump in Straw_Hats_Rule; I hope I speak for all of us when I say that we are happy to have you on the crew.


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#228 2006-10-19 15:29:49

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Hehehe....  We just like teasing you toenails.  Anyhoo... Glad you're enjoying the RP Straw_Hats_Rule, and indeed, straw hats do rule.


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#229 2006-10-19 18:00:54

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

HEY EVERYBODY! Sorry I haven't been as active lately but school has really been kicking my butt lately, I got Spanish, Art, History, Math....blah blah blah, so many test it's starting to make me insane. Any way, I don't think I'll be able to make a good 10+ post 'till next week, sorry again.

As for Aztec Island...since it was my idea in the first place, I'll throw out some ideas for you guys, and hopefully I can get active again around next Friday or earlier:

I was thinking maybe in this city (Ryxia port?), that we meet one of the inhabinants from Aztec Island( as for a name we need a better one, than Aztec Island...how about Tenoch-Titla? It's derived from the aztec capital city, but you guys can look around for better ideas too)

Anyway back to the character we meet, this is what I was thinking:

Xochi, a young attractive woman, who is pretty much the human embodyment of flirtation. She constantly flirts with all the guys and...let's just say she's...well endowed.
Maybe Vincent, with all his gambling and drinking could've met her in his drunkeness and they next morning she ends up on the ship out to sea. She says the next Island is hers, and maybe we could take her there.

The reality is that Xochi is actually sceduled to be sacrificed, and she's heading back to meet her "appointment".

That's a really rough draft, and you guys feel free to poke, prod, or completly reject. I hope this arc turns into some real fun...maybe a main boss who can control blood...or "GASP" vampires!(who act like the gods, so they can have a flowing supply of sacrificial blood). Anyway, you guys throw some more ideas out there so maybe this arc can rival that of Arabasta!(IN our dreams)

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#230 2006-10-19 18:13:51

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

how do you know so many names? and I would love to have Vincent seduced by the Aztec girl in his drunken stupor. maybe that's how he lost his clothes? who knows? What my babbling really meant hear is that I would be happy to introduce her if that fits everyone's needs.


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#231 2006-10-19 18:18:15

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ok so i like quetzals rough draft, and after thinking for a few, i came up with this version thats a little deeper.

Xochi discovered she was going to be the next sacrifice of to the "blood god" and was given a month to do as she pleased. She decided to fulfill all her earthly desires on an island not too far away so she would be able to return to her "honored duty" quickly while maximizing the time she has on earth *or w/e planet the one piece world is* After a while she discovers she has lost her means of returning home and begins to panic as the time has come to leave for Tenoch-Titla. Becoming desperate she attempts to use her flirting ability to cox drunken *or otherwise* men into giving her a ride back to her homeland.

I like the vampire idea but i dont wanna use a real vampire so if you give me about an hour or so ill come up with a guy thats based of the original dracula, Vlad the Impaler.


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#232 2006-10-19 18:19:32

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Yay! As for my names, recently I've written a short story for school based on Meso-American Mythology...and in Spanish class they sort of shove Hispanic history down our throats ( I've had about 30 quizes about Spanish History!).

Xochi is actually short for Xochiquetzal, the aztec godess of love and prostitues. It kind of fits her don't ya think?

Edit: And Kiyoshi, I like those ideas,I was definantly thinking of a group of vampires that sort of had the island in a hold of a theocratic orwellian society to feed their desire for blood. It can be like a "council of gods". You can see i'm also pulling a little from Skypiea.

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#233 2006-10-19 18:25:01

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

i also notice part of her name is your characters name, lol. jk im not implyin anything. unles..its true...then itd be weird. big_smile

anyway.
i wanna read up some on Vlad "the Impaler" Dracula before basing a character on him, so ill get him up tomorrow, maybe less depending on how much i wanna sweat my hw for tomorrow.

...im such a procrasinator to hw...

edit: nevermind...omg that guy was morbid...ok ill post a character thats based on him in about half an hour.

edit2: this is just something i can up with on the top of my head

NAME: Moriasin
AGE: 35
SEX: Male
BASIC DESCRIPTION (height, weight, hair color, eye color, etc.): black messy hair which partially covers his blood red eyes. Usually has a solemn face unless he is amused by some "sacrifice" before him, then he desplays a chilling grin. Wears a long robe given to him by his subjects. underneath it he is bear chested with pants. His spear is slung on his back at all times.
DF (Optional): *uh...u guys decide and ill edit it in if yes...*
SKILLS: knowing exactly what will get to a person. using his wits and powers to get what he wants
POSITION: "god" of Xochi's people
LIKES: ordering the Xochi's people to give him a sacrifice periodically and then torturing them for his own amusment or impaling them on spikes in the seclution of his tome(?)*crap i cant spell, like the graves given to the royals of ancient times*.
DISLIKES: anyone who opposes him, but he doesnt outwardly shows it, instead he orders another sacrifice and hints at who he wants.
WEAPONS:uses a spear.
OTHER (anything about your character that doesn't fit in the other categories):

oops sry man i just read your post, ya a council of gods would fit better than just one dude. so my guy can be one of them. if you want ill try to come up with other characters.

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#234 2006-10-19 19:59:17

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

i think a counsil would be better if for no other reason than we can pair off one piece style and deal with them when and if the time comes. and just to fit the theme of a vampiric enemy, we could give one of them the kyuketsu kyuketsu no mi (vampire vampire fruit), or the saki saki no mi (blood lust blood lust fruit). those both leave the realm of aztec and go much more towards vampiric, but they could be possiblities. i can name more vampire themed fruits if that is the direction we take.


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#235 2006-10-19 20:06:38

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

if everyone else wants to do an all vampire thing than sure but i cast my vote towards the whole idea of have a civilization under the influence of a council of people who act a lot like vampires, either by a fruit or simple blood lust like Vlad the Impaler


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#236 2006-10-19 20:16:36

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

either way is fine by me. the only problem with basing a bad guy counsil off of vlad for his blood lust is that vlad was NUTS. i can see them being sort of like him, but if we base them too heavily off of vlad then it will be hard to picture a god fearing counsil. vlad was much more of the "kill (and eat the flesh of/impale on spikes) all who oppose me and never share my power with anyone." philosophy. i can see where you are going with the vlad theme though, having a blood obsessed counsil is sufficiently creepy for me to say the least.

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#237 2006-10-19 21:03:13

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

bitsmart wrote:

I'll be looking for a book from you Gerard McCaul... (and possibly Dave)

How does he know so many names? Easy. He clicks on profiles. He knew toenails' (Gerard) and mine (Dave) from our profiles. Then, he uses them at random times to creep us out tongue

Anyway, I kinda skimmed the last page, but I like what I have read... so yeah...

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#238 2006-10-19 21:08:51

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

omnideus wrote:

either way is fine by me. the only problem with basing a bad guy counsil off of vlad for his blood lust is that vlad was NUTS. i can see them being sort of like him, but if we base them too heavily off of vlad then it will be hard to picture a god fearing counsil. vlad was much more of the "kill (and eat the flesh of/impale on spikes) all who oppose me and never share my power with anyone." philosophy. i can see where you are going with the vlad theme though, having a blood obsessed counsil is sufficiently creepy for me to say the least.

im glad you can see where im going with the vlad theme and i know i based the guy i made up too heavily on the original dracula which is why im gonna remake him and post it in the morning, sry i forgot to mention that.


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#239 2006-10-19 21:18:54

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

I like your original guy, I just wanted to stress that a whole counsel of vlads would be pretty hard to deal with, even for our crew, which by the way is pretty amazing right now. we could have him, a couple of other fighters, maybe some more manipulative non-fighting ones, and even one or two that can actually control people, since vampiric lore does involve those who can hypnotize mortal people. we could also give some (or the leader at least) some more vlad-like qualities, or the qualities of a blood drinking Aztec god, if quetzal can fill us in on one like that. all of these are good ideas, and I like the fact that the Aztec island isn't gonna be too predictable, in that they might not all be god obsessed, but instead just manipulating the people to feed their thirst for blood.


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#240 2006-10-19 21:25:53

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

ok so instead of remaking the first guy ill just try to come up with a new guy *with new qualities of course* and then wait for makorandy and everyone else to tell us what he thinks of what we've done with his brain child


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#241 2006-10-19 21:35:13

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

awesome possum. i will introduce Xochi in my next post if no one minds.


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#242 2006-10-20 03:55:48

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Nice one Vincent.

If you guys don't mind, in a few posts time, I'll have Jack either spot a new boat (to him) at the harbour, which turns out to be the Exile Pirates; or I'll have him meet someone, possibly Dimitri or Misty.

Out of interest... what happened to Corpus?


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#243 2006-10-20 04:29:11

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

he just kinda stopped posting so we just kinda pretended he never happened, even though he was an important plot device on the marine island wher we met quetzal


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#244 2006-10-20 05:16:41

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Has anyone tried PMing him?


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#245 2006-10-20 07:58:05

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Straw_Hats_Rule wrote:

They're fine. After all, I am doing Maths, Further Maths and Physics at A-level.

Just so you know toenails, your character is one of the most original I've seen! War maths is ace!

Is anyone going to post next, or should I slip an introduction in here?

EDIT: Everyone's offline, so I think I'll start a small introduction.

With Tsubaki. She said she hoped to see me soon.

EDIT 2: The Exile Pirates is a good name, as Jack can never return to his home island either, as he is wanted. The reason why will be revealed.

I could die with happiness when you said that you were not only doing the most noble subjects of all- you were doing them at A-level, which means you're a fellow brit! Lord be praised!

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#246 2006-10-20 08:03:16

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Just one more thing if you all like my writing. I'm actually in the middle of writing a book called atomic mage started just under a yyear ago. At the moment it's 100 pages long and I'm always looking for crit, so if you're interested just upload the file from here:
http://www.esnips.com/SharedFolderAction.ns#files

^^just a quick site i signed up to put it online.


(by the way i have to tell you that the first five, maybe six chapters, the prose absolutely STINKS. I haven't bothered editing any of it yet, but you'll see a marked improvement as it goes on if you're prepared to bear with it.

...and also  explains where just about every single name I use in the RPs come from.)

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#247 2006-10-20 08:17:42

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

Who's going to post next anyway?


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#248 2006-10-20 11:33:12

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

anyone who has something to add. just stay relevant.


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#249 2006-10-20 12:20:24

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

I think I'll wait for Misty or Dimitri's next part.

If anyone wants to post before them, they can.

I'm just waiting for a good opportunity to fully introduce my character.


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#250 2006-10-20 12:27:39

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Re: Final Fate RP Recruit Thread

ok straw hat, but for the love of god man delete some of your pms!

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