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NAME:ahmed
AGE:12
SEX:male
BASIC DESCRIPTION (height, weight, hair color, eye color, etc.):height:145 weight:36 hair color: black eye color:yellow
DF (Optional):
SKILLS: fighting
POSITION: ship fighter
LIKES: i like fighting and working hard
DISLIKES: nothing
BACKGROUND: i donno mabye cool
FIGHTING STYLE: taekwondo/karate/judo
WEAPONS: fists and legs
OTHER (anything about your character that doesn't fit in the other categories): recommends that you accept or he will kill you p.s. that was a joke
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no offense dude, but i think maybe you should work on ur character a little more

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yeah, your character needs more, like a background... after you add more, though, we will most likely accept you ![]()

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we do need a doctor desperatly *hint hint*
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*blinks blinks* *cries* Whoops, i thought i read everything... Oh, well! I'll try again, after I have time to read all of the posts in great detail. Hehehe.... Sorry!
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no worries. it wasn't a bad post, you just need to change time and place a little bit. you could basically keep the fight the same though. it is hard to catch up after several long posts (or pages), so it is totally reasonable to expect some transitional difficulty from where the story was when you last looked and where it is right now.

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The fact that I get confused easily, Kiyoshi can testify to this, also doesn't help. Can someone help me catch up to where we are. So far, I get that we are on Candor's Island (duh), Marlin got arrested, there are private areas that really aren't, the entire island seems like it's out to get us, and that's about it. Very vague, I know.
EDIT:
On another note, over the summer I tried to draw a small profile pic of all the crew members. Unfortunately, the crew kept on changing and getting bigger, and I lost them, so if you guys want, I can try again. There's 100% guarantee that I'll be able to draw your characters, because my skills is very limited, but if you can send me you character descriptions to my PM, it would make my life a lot easier. Thank you for your time! ^_^
Last edited by Tsubaki (2006-10-09 21:25:21)
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Well, we got to the island, Marlin got captured, and then there was a bit of a transitional period during which a couple of characters (Dimitri, John, and Vincent) got new weapons/abilities. Shortly afterward that same group of people (plus Quetzal) set out to find Misty and Marlin only to be confronted with warrior mathematicians. After their fights everyone in the crew except for Quetzal were transported to right outside of the prison area by one of Candor's more complex proofs, where Candor was surrounded by warrior mathematicians. The main goal now is to find quetzal and get off of the island. I think that about sums it up. Was that any help?

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Yep! Thanks a lot, so Annie and Tsubaki are also with the rest of the crew, correct?
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correct. that is why i think your fight post would work if you just changed setting. i am glad you are gonna keep posting.

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ok me and my brother are busy yet bored...soo....bored...so we decided to make up a comic strip. he'd draw and i'd come up with the story line. only i cant even come up with a story for this rp so to buy some time and to give us somethin to do, we agreed to make this rp a comic strip as a start. so um...ya if ther are any particular points u want to make about ur character then just post it here or pm me.
and dont wory about out of character moments cuz im just using the rp itself im not making up any of it. *im pretty sure*

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that is pretty damn cool. i will try to give a better discription of vincent in the near future. i like the idea of making this story into a comic strip.

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hey people erm i should get my computer back on saturday so i should be able to post then. man i gotta lot of catchin up to do. by da way feel free to take control of my character any time i mean i can texactly do anything with him for now XD lol
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Wow Kiyoshi that sounds awesome, Quetzal's really just a jaguar with robot arms, can't wait to see him drawn...
Oh, and one more thing, toenails and omindeous, you guys did a great job with Pythagoras, you made her 100x the badass i could've ever made her. Great jOB!!
Last edited by Makorandy (2006-10-11 18:37:06)
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i do what i can. Pythagora was fun for me to think about, because the idea of warrior mathematicians is an interesting one. i love making enemies that have unique abilities, and love reading each following battle post. i love reading from more than my own point of view, and i think we have a good crew battle and story wise, so the different posts diversify the story without hurting it.

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And I knew she messed with peoples brains, so I thought "emotion surgery" would be the perfect attack for a psychopathic warrior math brain surgeon.
Edit: How are Quetzal's arms attached, I mean, I pictured them on his back...but now that I look at your profile, and John just agreed to fix them...how's that gona work...?
Last edited by John Fuuma (2006-10-13 20:22:07)
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im gonna be gone for the weekend, might be back monday morn or night dont know yet.

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heya people im back again and now able to post again in the rp
but i gotta lota catchin up 2 do!
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Are you guys still accepting members?
Can you post an update of what positions are available, and who is doing what?
And would it matter if there were two people for a position?
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hey jack-san! lol erm Well We have 2 nittoryu users (me and vincent) so i dont think they'll be bothered about two people for a position.
and by the way I rekomend this rp! it is filled with truley intelligent and imaginative writers! especially toenails man that guys mind must be huge! lol
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we should probably avoid having two people for one job (not that i mind if we do). we do have some fairly necessary postions that still need filling. i will post a postion list in a little while.
Last edited by omnideus (2006-10-15 12:59:34)

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well do we really need a doctor if candor suceeds in his healing proof? but there are other positoins.
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here are the positions thus far:
captain: Silent Echo (Misty)
1st Mate: Kiyoshi (Dimitri)
Navigator: Tsubaki (Tsubaki)
Entertainer: Bitsmart (Marlin)
Cook: Battle_Royale (Annie)
Gunner/carpenter/blacksmith: John Fuuma (John Fuuma)
Philosopher/ warrior mathematician: toenails (Candor)
Mechanic: Makorandy (Quetzal)
Strategist/gambling addict/: Me! (Vincent)
blacksmith/ repairman: katana master (Renegade)
and i can see candor healing people, but only for minor injuries. i love his power, but it needs to be limited or else he will end up filling every different class. also, almost everyone in our crew is a fighter, so don't be surprised if that does not feature in the job discriptions. please note that i didn't add two people because one wasn't accepted, and one just stopped posting. Straw_Hats_Rule, i think you are probably more than welcome to join, but you would do well to read through everything. i know that might take a while, but if you read all of the character discriptions and the story thus far, it will be far easier for you to jump in and interact with current characters.
Last edited by omnideus (2006-10-15 13:15:16)

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Not sure I'd be good for a doctor...
Chef's more my thing. But I could try another position you need.
In fact, I'm working on a post for the Silver Moon pirates right now, so you can get a taste of my writing. No fighting in this one, but a bit of character development.
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cool. you don't need to be a doctor, i was simply stating that we kind of need one. feel free to post the class with which you are best equiped to be. i will check out your post in the other RP though, i love reading other RP posts.

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