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Rain placed herself gently on a bar stool. "sooo you want to know of Monkey. D. Luffy?.... what's you’re business with him little girl?"
Rain looked worried to reply as she thought no-one would believe her.... "Well?...." the bartender queried.
"I am rain luffy's twin sister and I need to know the where-abouts of my brother" she whispered to the man, she looked over the shoulders of the bartender and noticed that jack had been listening to what she said. Her glare at jack was interrupted by a loud outburst of laughter from the bartender, then rain felt a gentle touch to her shoulder, before she turns round a voice whispers in her ear “I believe you, come sit with me in the corner and I can maybe help you.."
She turns round to only see the tall, dark, cloaked figure she first saw when she arrived. She follows him to the table and sits down. Before she could speak a stool is pulled up and placed next to her, the barman jack sat in the stool and said "so you’re the in-famous rain."
He smirks and stares..." So what ya wonna know bout lil ol' luffy then?" jack asked
Rain began to explain her business.................

Last edited by katana master (2006-09-22 01:54:17)

As Rain was looking round she could not help but glare at the cloaked man across the table, she stared deep into the shadow of his hood, all she could see of his features was his eyes. They had a harsh glare to them and the aqua colours seemed to hypnotise Rain. She glared closer, a grin began to show through the shadow of his hood, this grin  had an evil feel to it however, his teeth gleemed and his eyes widdened. Rain's concentratoin was interupted when the cloaked man spoke. " Diddn't anyone ever tell you its rude to stare?"
Rain was puzzled beyond complextoin, she did not know what to make of this cloaked man. She thought to herself " Who is this guy? why do I feel as if I can't trust him? but yet I feel so drawn to him, why? "

Rain glared down at the man's side and noticed he was clutching three swords, She thought to herself " wait a second... three swords..... no it can't be he was captured by the marines zoro would be dead by now.... there's only one other santouryu user in east blue and thats.... no it cant be him what buissness would he have hear there are no pirates with a large bounty on thier head! " She was interupted again.
" So how exactly are you planning to follow luffy with no crew? you can't go sailing the seas with no crew especially in the grand line! " jack emplied.

"I know so thats why I'm here in this bar to find willing pirates to come on my voyage!" said Rain with joy
" Haha you can deffinitely tell your Luffy's sister all right! " jack said while smiling at Rain
" You need crew member's? " said the cloaked man.
" Yea! are you intrested? " Rain screeched in delightment
" I never said that......... however I will think about it. " the cloaked man mumbled.
" Well at least tell me your name? " said Rain
A long pause between the three began..... until silence was broke by a breath. " I have no name however I have claimed a title... they call me renegade. "
Jack and Rain look in amazement.
" What on earth are you doing here!?! " jack said with a tone of suprise in his voice
" I needed a drink and a rest " said renegade
" I knew it! I thought your characteristics seemed firmiliar! the eyes, hooded cloak and the three katana. The semi-famous Renegade... well I never " said Rain.
Renegade grined and stared straight into the eyes of Rain, this was a piercing glare he gave her. Rain felt awkward and turned to Jack to avoid his stare and began questoining.....................

Last edited by katana master (2006-09-22 12:16:51)

Before the barman could get a word in edge ways Renegade spoke " How recent is that poster?!? "
" Just came in now ma boi, why you ask? " the barman said
" None of your concern osan! " Renegade replied instantly
" Well if that girl is 'Luffy's twin sister' then she should scram before the marines outside start questoining. We have some very loud mouth people in here " the barman said as he grined
" Rain follow me now! " Renegade shouted.

She quickly got up and grabbed Jack's hand dragging him to Renegade. Renegade grabbed the nearest coat and flung it around Rain, pulling up the hood. " whats going on Renegade? Why have you given me this coat and why are you rushing? " asked Rain.
" No questoins, just follow my lead you two " ordered Renegade
They all rushed out the door, Renegade noticed that some marines were coming toward the bar, they were marching at full speed they oviousely had info that a connectoin to Luffy was here. " You two follow me and keep up! " said renegade
" YOSH! " agreed both Rain and Jack nodding thier heads.
They ran the opposite directoin to the marines leaving Rain no time to think about what was even going on. " Hey follow me i know a friend who's we can hide out in for a while, at least long enough for us to find out whats going on! " shouted Jack
" Sure, take lead Jack " said Rain
Jack took lead and ran into a near by ally and down some steps into a basment door. He knocked in a parculiar way, like it had a certain pattern to it, like a code knock or something. The door burst open and pulled all three of them in and then the door slamed shut tight again.

" What's going on Jack where are we? " asked Rain
"Rain say hello to a good friend of mine, Caska. She will let us stay here for a short while however we can not put her life at stake and stay for too long. " said Jack
" Hi there! " said Caska as she smiled
" Hi, thank you ever so much, for letting us stay although I am still not sure why I am here? " said Rain looking confused
" There was a rat in the pub, he must of over heard your convasatoin with the barman and told the marines. " explained Renegade
" But why did we have to leave then? " asked Rain again
" Because your connected to Luffy and Luffy has a large bounty on his head! " said Renegade
" Thats why you droped your beer! " said Jack pointing his finger in the air.
" Plus not only do you have a small bounty on your head Rain for stealing a ship and numerouse other offences but I too have a bounty " said Renegade.
" ooo I see now, well I'm tired from all that running... arh " *yawns and stretches* " nap time! " said Rain as she lays her head down.
" Well from the stories I've heard thats deffinitely Luffy's sister no doubt about it! She's got Luffy written all over her! well i suppose she hasn't got a bad idea ya know I think we should both get some rest yea? " asked Jack
" hmm I'm not tired however I shall do some meditating, you get some rest I shall wake you two when the coast is clear for the time-being. "

Jack lays down next to Rain and begins to sleep. Renegade sits on the floor cross legged with deep concentratoin in his eyes, he thinks to himself " That straw hat... thats Shanks hat im sure of it! The boy has connectoins to Shanks? " ........................................

Even Renegade gave a small chuckle, this suprised even himself. He coughed and stopped himself from laughing any futher. "okay guy's, well food shall be ready soon!" said Caska.
" Can I help Caska? I'm sure I can spice things up a lil plus It's the least I can do for your generouse hospitallity." asked Jack.
" ermm... sure why not after all you are like the best chef around! " Caska says whith a smile on her face.
" A chef?!?" asked Rain with glee.
" Yea I cook a lil.. I'm not that great but I make do." said jack
"well I'll be the judge of that! c'mon chef cook us up a meal fit for a queen! A pirate queen that is!" screeched Rain with a grin that stretched across her face.
Renegade looks over and asks " Do you really think you can make it to the grand line? Do you know of the dangers out there?"
" ermm. nope but I guess I'll find out and I don't care I've got to find my brother and get one piece!" said Rain as her grin stretched further across her face.
Renegade smirked " Heh... you really don't care do you? As long as you find your brother.. I admiar you bravery and admiratoin" said Renegade as he bowed his head.
* BANG BANG BANG* "Where's my meat!" Yelled Rain banging her knife and fork on the table.
"It's Bloody com'in! don't be so impa!tient" Jack said as he walks in the room with plates full of a feast fit for a king. Rain's eyes widdened and her mouth was wide open, she could not stop gawping at the food.
" WOW!" said Rain with astonishment.
" It's not....that .....g..r..e..a..t?" said Jack as Rain stuffed her face like there was no tomorrow. Jack's face began to crumple up in disgust then began to to wrinkle up some more but now a smile was placed upon his face, he began to chuckle "hahaha! wow you really do like your food!"
Rain's plate was left spinning empty. "That was great! Hey if I have a crew I'm goin to need a cook! well what do you think?" quwstoined Rain.
"Me!?! wel erm I mean erm I can't. This is my home I have to stay on this island." replied Jack
"You must be kidding you can't stay on this island the marines will have you in an instant. You've been seen co-operating with Rain, the least that will become of you if you stay on this island will be banishment." explained Renegade.
"Are you sure?" asked Jack.
"Marine code I'm affraid." said Renegade
"Well it's decided then you'll have to join me now!" said Rain with a sping in her voice as she grabbed Jack round the neck and began to laugh.
"Looks like your stuck my friend!" Renegade said with a smirk.
"Ahh same rules apply with you don't forget Renegade looks like your stuck with me too!" said Rain with a spring in her voice.
" yea looks like it. heh" Renegade said as he roled his eyes.
" Haha looks like this is the beggining of a new adventure for all us us eay?!"............................

Last edited by katana master (2006-09-22 12:31:43)

Jack was over come with rage, his eyes steamed over the viens in his neck began to buldge and you could hear the grinding of his teeth as his jaw tightened. With out turning to Renegade and keeping his eyes fixed on the blood-stained hands of the marine he comanded "Renegade fetch Rain.. I'll deal with these bastards!"
Before Renegade could respond Jack sprung from the the ground in a horizontal dash staight at the marine at break-neck speed. Jack raised his fist high above his head as plundged towards the marine dealing a fatal punch to the marines face making his face cripple. The marine smashed into the floor with tremendous force making an explosoin of dust fly up. Jack staid tense, the only movement from him was him panting and grinding his teeth. The marines stood froze in astonishment, jack turned to Renegade and bellowed again to Renegade "Help her now! Before it's too late!".
Renegade nodded and turned to the water as Jack continued to fight unaware of what Renegade was doing. Renegade closed his eyes in deep concentratoin, dust began to kick up, strong winds picked up, the dirt started to curl round Renegades body creating a small whirwind of some sort. The water began to part and Renegade trembled. It was easy to tell that Renegade was under great stress as he began  graon as if he was reciving great pain "arrrrghh!" he yelled.
The waters began to twirl like a small whirlpool leaving dry land in the centre where Rain's body lay back to its normal state. Renegade jumped down to pick up Rain's unconciouse corpse but when doing so the waters began to close. Renegade holds out his arms as if he was holding the waters up. "COME ON! DON'T GIVE UP! YOU'VE TRAINED THIS POWER!" Renegade yelled.
The waters began to part at an imediate rate and with that happening Renegade picked up Rain and flung her over his shoulder. Renegade jumped back up onto the deck of the port. There stood Jack with an unconciouse pile of marines under his foot. "No promblem, I thought that would be a challange heh!" he said smugishly.
"however not as impressive as your lil show. care to explain?..." Jack asked
"Nows not the time Jack we need to get Rain some help. A doctor or at least someone with medical experience." said Renegade as he staggered to hold up Rain. Renegade's knee's began to give way. " take her! " said Renegade.
Jack flung Rain over his shoulder. " Any smart...ideas? *pant*? " asks Renegade.............................

Last edited by katana master (2006-09-22 13:02:57)

As Jack hears this mysterious voice he sees a half open door on one of the houses and is called inside by a mysterious figure.
Renegade enters first closely followed by jack with rain bleeding on his back. the room is too dark to see anything, all the light is blacked out with dark curtains and no lamps, the myserious silhouette pulls rain off of jacks back and removes the bandage and sighs.
"im sorry my friends" says the man "there is no hope for your friend. he lays her on what appears to be a doctors bed and spoons some medicine in her mouth.
"what do you mean no hope" said renegade "the wound isnt that deep most people would survive a wound like this if they were treated in this short amount of time"
"the wound may not be  deep but the blade used was doused in the poisen from deadly nightshade, there is a 100% fatality rate for humans" said the mysterious figure. "all we can do now im afraid it wait".
The mysterious figure directs jack and renegade upstairs to a small bedroom with a double bed in it. "heres your room untill she recovers if of course she recovers" says the dark figure.
"why are all the lights off and who are you" said jack. " if theres no chance of survival why even try to cure her?"
"im not stupid you know my friends ive seen you are being pursued by the marines and a lightened house will most definatly attract them, your friend here gives off a strange aura, similar to someone ive cured miraculously before when he had no chance, and as for my name, maverick will do just fine." he says.

Last edited by mothrider (2006-09-24 02:29:06)

"RAIN!!" They said at the same time.
They jumped out of their seats and ran downstairs to find Maverick trying to, but obviously failing, to hold down Rain.
She was flailing about, trying to get up and this confused Jack and Renegade until she spoke.
"I NEED TO SEE IF THE JACK AND RENEGADE ARE OKAY DAMMIT!!!!!" She shouted, obviously not noticing the pair in the door seeing as her eyes were clamed shut in pain.
"You have to sit down before you reopen the wound and spread the poison even more!!!" He said.
"I DON'T CARE RIGHT NOW!! ITS MY FAULT THEY"RE IN THIS MESS IN THE FIRST PLACE!!" She shouted.
Her flailing wasn't helping the pain, poison, or wound.
She was in so much pain there was tears coming out of her eyes.
'Hes right, we have to do something!" Jack thought
'If she keeps this up the marines will hear!" renegade thought.
"RAIN! We're allright settle down,"Jack said, and hearing this she imediatly settled down and a look of relief washed across her face.
"Im so gla-ungh," She arched her back in pain.
"Where does it hurt," Maverik said immediatly.
He had his suspisions.
"Chest-gasp-hurts," she said obviously in pain and fell unconcious.
"Its as i thought. The poison has spread throughout her body, and the bloodloss isnt helping either but most of all not only was the sword covered in poison, it is made of seastone!!!" He said, he then unwrapped the wound to see it was bleeding again but also saw a piece the sword imbeded deep.
"Hand me those tweezers over there!" he said and Jack ran and fetched them real quick.
"Brace her, this will hurt a lot!" they listened to him and braced her.
He carefully used his tweezers and put them inside the wound.
This alone made her face scrunch up in pain.
He made his way in and grabed the shard and slowly pulled it out.
It was now that the real pain began. She unconciously flailed about and moaned in pain.
Her face was once again scrunched up in pain and was covered in a layer of sweat.
When he was finished he cleaned the wound and rewrapped the wound.
"Stay with her," he said simply and took the shard and dissapeared upstairs.

"thats quite impossible im sorry" said maverick " i have patients here, i cant just leave them and thats not to mention the enormous bounty i would get on my head from harbouring pirates, its just not worth it for people i dont know "
"what thats a lame excuse, your coming" replies jack
" its his choice lets go before the marines get here"interupts renegade "jack come on"
jack follows while glancing back at maverick in annoyance
"what about rain, she's in agony and without a doctor shes as good as dead" argues jack
renegade stops in his track and stares jack in the face " if he has no heart theres nothing we can do"
When jack and renegade reached the Mystic Rain ( Rains ship) they looked at each other in amazement when they saw maverick with a katana in his hand, a backpack that appeared to be medical and strangley maverick was in the form of half dragonfly half human.
"Hey i changed my mind" shouted maverick "get on board quick" maverick points at a large group of marines with there swords drawn. maverick then transforms into a human and starts to combat the marines with help from renegade while jack takes rain onto the deck.
"you know maverick " pants renegade in the middle of combat "our skills compliment each others very well"
"I was thinking the same thing"said maverick "but i havnt finished mastering this katana style, my father started me off but after he passed away i felt the need to train my medical skills so i can help people like my mother and father."
"well why dont i train you i know that style very well" replies renegade
"GREA..."mumbled maverick while jack shoves him aside also combatting marines
"geez you guys sure are slow" he says
" we were talking" siad renegade
maverick crawls away while shouting "ill deal with rain you jerks"
"SURE" shouts renegade and jack simeltaniously.
Once the marines were incapasitated renegade and jack joined maverick below deck to see to rain
"this is amazing guys, she's made a dramatic recovery" she is still not safe but the heat of the action must have given her that spure to survive" said maverick " i know for certain now, she's related to monkey. d . luffy isnt she..."
renegade and jack look at each other in amazement!

Last edited by mothrider (2006-09-24 13:54:36)

Rain POV

My eyes slowly opened but I quikley closed them seeing as my eyes weren't adjusted to the light.
I opened them again, squinting, but they were still open.
I shifted a little and tryed to sit up but suddenly a wave of pain washed over me so I layed back down.
"You caused a lot of commotion missy," I heard a voice beside me say.
'What is he talking about' Than I remembered the events that took place, or while I was awake rather.
I examined my surroundings and found that they were oddly familiar.
"Where am I? Is this the Mystic Rain? Who are you? I said and a few seconds later I remembered Jack and Renegade "Are Jack and Renegade alright?"
"Im Maverick and your on your ship  Jack and Renegade are fine and you need to take Rain, or should I say captain?" he said and that left me confused.
"Huh?" I said simply while he was trying to get me to take what was supposedly medicine.
"You need to take these painkillers and then I'll answer your questions," he said and i obliged but as he made a move to say something Renegade walked into the room.
A look of relief washed across my face and my hyper senses kicked in and forgeting about my pain jumped up snd ran to greet him with mine and Luffys trademark grin plastered on my face.
"Renegade! Your alright!" and my smile faded as I saw he had blood on his hands and I didnt know about the marines so I assumed the worst.
"YOU KILLED JACK!" I said through my teeth. "I TRUSTED YOU!!!!!!!!" I ran after Renegade and he ran across the ship.
Of course, he was faster and I got frustrated being so slow and transformed into my wolf form.
"Full Moon transformation!" and then I chased him and eventually cornered him.
I snarled at him and my red eyes glared.
"W-ait Rain I -" he stuttered and I didn't listen.
"I TRUSTED YOU!" I said again and this time he knew I wouldn't listen.
"I didn't want to do this but I've got no choice. He drew his swords and we started running toward eachother but were stopped by someone who stepped between us used his fist and foot to stop us.
"JACK!"

Last edited by fullmetalninja (2006-09-25 11:35:33)

"RIGHT THEN!" yelled jack with a jolly tone.
"I'm hungry who wan'ts grub?" he asked.
"Neeeeeeeeeeeed meeeaaaaaaaat *sigh*" said Rain as she lifted her arm up perfetically.
"Is she all right to eat Doc? Jack asked.
" Yeah she could do with the streangth." said Maverick.
"No problem ermmm.... do we have food?" Queried Jack.
"oh erm..... no I ate it all." Rain whimpered.
"Renegade looks like were going fishing!" jack said with a smile on his face.
"With what I ask?" Renegade asked.
"well we can dangle you over board as bait... but you wouldn't make good bait as you are rather erm puney" jack said as his grin grew further acroos his face while he began to laugh.
"hmm maybe we should dangle you over the edge seeming that gut should attract a greedy fat fish!" Renegade began to give a small sarcastic chuckle.
Jack turns round and pokes his belly a few times and whimpers to himself "I'm not fat"
"Just get on deck and start making a net or something!" said jack as he points to the stairs.
"all right then.............tubby" Renegade murmers as he passes Jack with his grin shinning through the shadow of his hood.
As soon as Renegade reaches the top of the stairs Jack snaps round to Rain and Maverick, opens his mouth wide. "Do you thi-"
"No your not fat Jack!" Rain and Maverick say in unison rolling thier eyes.
"Okay then me and my fit self are gonna catch us some grub!" Jack said as he skiped off proding his belly.
Rain and Maverick looked at each other and began to laugh."You really got these lot from the funny farm din't you!" Maverick said while whiping a tear from his eye from laughing too much.
"Yea they're great. I mean they've helped a complete stranger and well as for you well..... lets just say I owe you one!" said Rain with a smile on her face holding out her hand to shake with agreement.
Maverick shakes her hand and says " aye captin you do indeed "
"welcome aboard!" Said Rain with her grin stretching further.

Renegade was using an old net he found on board dangling it over the edge of the ship trying to catch something.
"Whats that over there?" asked Jack.
"What?" Renegade said
"over there!" said Jack while pointing into the distance.
A piece of drift wood was floating out at sea with what appeared to be a person of some sort on top unconciouse.
"Renegade direct the ship towards him he needs help!!" jack said.........................

"Bored . . . Bored . . . Still bored," Rain said because Maverick wouldn't let her out of bed.
She was really frustrating her Nakama though.
"Rain thats the hundredth time you've said that in the past ten minutes!" Renegade said gritting his teeth.
"Look Rain I'll give another helping of fish if you shut up," Jack was struggling to stay calm but that seemed to do the trick.
"Wheres Maverick anyway?" Rain asked a plan brewing in her mind. "Look behind you!" Renegade looked behind him and as soon as he did he saw one of his katana gone and Rain in wolf form running away.
"Hey! Give that back!." Hes shouted after her and started running after her.
"You've got to catch me first!" She said looking back at him as she ran.
Jack found this funny and he couldn't help but laugh at the fact that not only did Renegade actually look behind him, but not think that troublemaker had something brewing in her mind.
Suddenly they saw Maverick but Rain couldn't stop in time so she just jumped over him.
Unfotunatly, she didn't see that he was by the railing of the ship and realised too late she was no longer on the ship and falling fast until she hit the water.

Meanwhile on the deck.
"wow look at that cloud" coughed rain " its huuuuuuge"
"your right that does look a tad worrying" replies maverick
jack burst open the kitchen door "we better avoid that cloud over there it looks serious"
"comon everyone, all hands on deck"ordered renegade "jack hard to starboard we cant risk hitting that storm"
"what do you know about storms anyway" inquired maverick
"theres no time for that now you fool, climb the mast and set the sail, or youll find out" angrilly shouted renegade "and try to patch up those holes i made in the sail we'll need the speed"
maverick stood up straight stared at renegade in the eye and did a respectfull nod "YOSH" replied maverick
"ill take rain back to the cabin and stay with her"insisted conrad"
"i can manage uurrgh" cried rain as she dropped to the floor, maverick noticed this from the top of the mast and shouted down to conrad
"when you get her to the cabin theres a small pot of medicine, a sort of green colour, give her a spoonful every 30 minuits" shouted maverick in an authoritive manor " i have a feeling we'll be up here for quite a while"
renegade gave conrad a helping hand carrying rain to the cabin and came rushing out with a startled face.
"guys we have a problem" mumbled renegade" we have a small fleet of marine ships tailing us and there catching up"
"come to mention it im sure i just saw a small fleet of ships just east of that storm" worried maverick " isnt that the way were going?"
"SHIT"cried rtenegade "we are not goin through that storm"
renegade convinced himself of the fact that the mystic rain would not sail through the storm and when he looked up again the ship had pointed its nose directly at it
"what the hell are you doing" shouted renegade in a rage
"sorry renegade i made a team descision" argued jack" its the only way"
"I agree, im sorry renegade"mumbled maverick as he stowed the sail
"......everyone into the bridge, where gonna need all our strength to get through this storm alive," ordered renegade in a dissapointed, yet frightened voice "maverick is that sail fully stowed and tied tightly to the mast?"
"its safe"replied maverick
"good, we cant risk the sail being open through a storm this big"sighed renegade.
  In the cabin conrad was giving rain a spoonfull of the medicine maverick recomended
"comon eat up capt'n"asked conrad nicely
"nope tastes like sand" argues rain
"comon dont be silly its for your own health"insisted conrad
he took a spoonfull of the medicine and as he was about to spoon it into rains mouth her eyes rolled backwards and she fainted.
"OH GOD"cried conrad "what the hell"
Foam started to spurt from rains mouth and conrads eyes slowly widened with horror
conrad pushed the cabin door open and shouted up to the other crew memebers
"rains not lookin to good guys gimme a  hand""
"we cant were about to hit the storm and itll need all of us on the helm to stay in control"replied remnegade in a fluster
"uuurrgg aaaarrggg" cried maverick as he tried to keep the helm steady witht he rest of the crew"we'll switch places conrad"
conrad runs up to the helm and as maverick lets go he grabs it but before he could the helm went into a wild spin.
"arrrrr shit" shouts jack and he runs towards the deck to get his fishing net " this things damn usefull at the moment eh guys" he ses with a frightened smirk on his face, he wrapps it atround the helm and renegade conrad and jack all start to pull on it to add leverage to the helm to make it easier to control.
"this wont last long mav, so hurry the hell up" oredered renegade
"sure thing guys ill be 5 minuits tops"replied maverick with a smaile on his face.
"looks like my lovely trout is gonna go to waste"said jack dissapointed
on the other side of the ship as maverick opens the door to the cabin rain hears jacks comment about the trout
"NEEEVVVEEERRRRRRRRR" shouts rain with all her energy

Last edited by mothrider (2006-09-26 10:59:33)