#1 2007-07-18 16:07:02

Korten
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One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

Snow coverd Gemena like a white blanket. The Tiruki festival started in the town square.
Tiruki the founder of gemena. once a great pirate. serti has just got out of work at the
tool shop. Serti heads east of town where the town inn that he's staying at is. Serti
walks into the inn and heads up the staris to his room. Serti falls on to his bed "wow
lots of people went to the tool shop today. Yes now since now I can pay for the ship I
can off of this island. Since the ship has almost been complete I can leave tommarow."
Serti gets up and looks out the frozen window in his room. Serti looksa and see's
everyone outside dancing, drinking, and just siting around. "sucks I cant go out there and
party. I need to rest so I can leave early and head to the closet island." The next day
at 10:00 am early in the morning. Serti goes to the shipwrights shop and drops the
money at the desk with a note. He walks to the ship and by himself unfoleds the sails, that
were already on the ship. He starts going east near the island lougetown  to get more people
to join his new crew.




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#2 2007-07-19 17:07:43

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

“Hey you, you young whipper schnapper, get off of my lawn! Wait a darn tootin’ minute, this ain’t my lawn. I lost my lawn in the war. Hey punk do I know you from some where, the sewers, the milk carton, the mail?” said a crazy man in his fifties who thought he was in his nineties, his name was Del. “So out with it you cookoo punk, where’d we meat?”

“We’re neighbors,” replied Serti.

“No, you punks always be spreading lies. It’s a conspiracy, you’re a spy from the war, you’ve been following me!” yelled Del.

Serti walked away from the man and back to what he was doing. Suddenly a wave came up to the ship and was about to land. Serti noticed however Del did not. “Del move!” he yelled.

“My knees are going to buckle, besides what does a young pink like you know? Del snapped back.

Serti tackled the man out of the way, and just in time. Half a second later the deck was hammered with a wave that would have crushed Del. Fortunately nothing was damaged.

“You’re not a spy; you’re my captain from the war, that’s where I know you from. Reporting for duty sir!” replied Del, finally liking Serti.


Brother: opens pepsi bottle, looks at top, "Oh man, I'm a loser!"
Dad: "You don't need a pepsi bottle to figure that out,"

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#3 2007-07-28 06:48:43

moizeus
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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

Finally a man with robes walked next to the young hobos.

He noticed something familiar about then so he stop for a second to stare at then, thinking *Where have I seen these two* as a distraction the young fellows asked the mysterious man *What ARE YOU DOING!!!?*, stop listening to our conversation.

The young mysterious fellow ask then if there was someone else in this place cause he has only saw the hobos.

Finally he ask if they were some sort of robbers.He waited for then to answer they didn't answer him.
After that he decided to leave the two hobos,and walked on his next path looking for clues about the island history.

He managed  to have found some clues about the rocks that has some writing on then.
Suddenly Serti comes into the mysterious person.

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#4 2007-07-28 10:21:40

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

"Hello! What are you doing?
The mysterious person gets up and says "Studying these rocks for clues on the island history"
"Can you read that? because I know no one who can read it"
The mysterious man countines to study the writing on the rock. 

"Well you just keep studying that rock and im just go"
The man stops serti and ask him "is there anymore rocks like this on the island?"
Serti quickly answers him "yup just head up this dirt road and you come up to a ruin city"
"A ruin city! thank you very much" The man starts to head up the dirt path and then he stops.
"there really is a ruin city and lots of the stones and builds have the same writing on them!"

he quickly heads to the first stone with writing on it and countinues to study them.


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#5 2007-07-28 10:30:07

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

"What a nutter! In my day we read off squids! Now adays you whipperschnappers read off of stones in some weird language!" yelled Del.

"None of that is true," Serti replied to himself knowing that there was no use in arguing.

"What did you say!? Where are we logue town? I lost my face here in the war,"

the two men kept on walking down the road, Del would yell at any person he saw who was walking on the grass. Del, every couple of minutes, would ask what they were doing.


Brother: opens pepsi bottle, looks at top, "Oh man, I'm a loser!"
Dad: "You don't need a pepsi bottle to figure that out,"

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#6 2007-07-28 11:19:19

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

The mysterious man keeps on studying the rocks until something came into his mind.

*Would this fellows know something about the stones?* he questioned himself
the mysterious man thought for a moment * who needs this losers anyway am studying rocks by myself, I don't need any loser's help.

Finally the mysterious man got out a notebook, and starts writing the words that were written on the rock.

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#7 2007-07-28 21:26:06

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

"Hey! Del! DEL!" screamed at him.
"WhAt!?" he repiled.
"I need to go buy two sword's. Seeing that the only swords
I ever used was on the island that belonged to the dojo. So
just stay here and dont cause anything bad to happen and
people start chasing us." Serti answerd very Seriously.

"Alrighty sir Sertu!" Del replied.
"Del try to act normal and its Serti! not Sertu!" Serti yelled at him.
He starts to head down to the marketplace.  Then after a short walk he
arrives at the weapon store. "Welcome! Please look around and then come to
me." siad the store owner. Serti looks carefuly at the katana's and then picks
up two swords. "I want these two how much will that be?"
"You have very good eyes my friend! You have picked the Snow Katana and
Night Shadow's Katana!"

Serti asked him "so how much do you think that be?"
"about lets say 400,000 Beli"
Serti looks into his pouch "good I have 500,000 beli! 400,000 beli for the
two katana's and 100,000 for supplies and food"
Serti takes the two katana's and drops the 400,000 beli on the counter.
then heads out the door and heads back to Del.
"Del! Del!"
"What?" Del asked Serti.
"We need to hurry soon so we can get out of this town before the marines
find our ship. so we will stay here for one night and Tomorrow well go buy
suplies and food."
"okay captian!"


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#8 2007-07-29 07:33:02

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

Serti had told Del to stay put while he went into a store, Del agreed. However the second Serti was out of sight Del caused trouble. Dels 30 minutes of trouble.

With in 30 seconds Del saw a man. "Hey you," he yelled pointing at the man, "come here!". The man sprinted away, Del was hot on his tale he dashed through the crowds pushing people to the ground. He ran right into an ally between two brick buildings. The man started to scale the wall and with in seconds he was on the roof. The crazy Del still followed, the man ran across the roof and jumped straight through a window of the building ahead. They jumped into a fairly sketchy room, on the inside there was a man holding a gun.

"Dude who are you?! I'm gonna shoot!"

Del punched the man, took his gun and through him on his back, "Spy scum!". He continued to run after the man who ran down 4 flights of stairs into a back ally again. There were 2 more sketchy men with a gun, one looking like an arms dealer, the other like a buyer.

"Crap a whitness!" one man yelled and aimed his gun at dell.

Dell took them both down, took there guns and threw them on his back, "More scum!". He followed the man even further out of the ally, across the road, into a store and out the back ally. A 5th man was standing with a gun and Del did the same as he had done to the last 3. Now he had 4 guns, the man ran infront of the naval base where Del shot him in the leg with all 4 of his guns with one shot each.

"Sir, you... you just took down 5 wanted criminals! They've been terrorizing this town," said a marine captain, "you should join my crew!"

"That's alright I'm a pirate. How could you let these spy scum in this town!?" Del strolled softly back to where he was supposed to meet Serti.

"Pirate, Marines take him down!"

Del was already to far away though, he heard the marines coming so he jumped through windows, ran through the market knocking over stands and busted doors to escape. People screamed at him as he ran. He finally returned to where he was supposed to be.


Brother: opens pepsi bottle, looks at top, "Oh man, I'm a loser!"
Dad: "You don't need a pepsi bottle to figure that out,"

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#9 2007-07-31 17:51:58

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

"Del You DID WHAT!?"
"Sorry Captin Sorti" softly said to Serti.
"Del head to the ship and make sure no marines are
following you. While I go buy us some food so we can get out of here"
Del starts to head near the ship. Serti running the other way.

"Crap theres marines every where! Del please get to the ship
unnotice!" Serti starts to run faster so he can get to the shop
sooner. "Wheres our ship?" Del thought. "I think it was south."
Serti hears people all talking about pirates in the town.
"Now we really need to hurry! were's the stupid food store!"
Serti run's and run's till he finally reaches the store.
"We need apples, chicken, steak, and raman"
Serti picks up all of thoes and then walks up to the shop
clerck. " That will be 100,000 beli! Boy you're buying alot"
"yeah here you go bye" Serti heads out the door.

"Ahhhh!!!" A girl screamed. "what as that! oh no Del!"
seven marines got Del on to the ground. "My captian serti
will beat up all of ya!" Del said. "Oh? And just were is your
captia-" Serti run's past them and grabs on to Del and run's
like he never have before. "Thoes stupid pirates! go after them!"
"yes sir!" the marines start to chase them.

"oh hell! were not even near the ship!" Serti said.
"Captain Sorti why didnt you take those guys down?"
Del said very fast. " We have no time for that we need
to get out of here now!" Serti and Del just keep runing till
they finally reach the ship. " We made it now get on the
ship Del!" Serti said to him. "yes Captian!"
"bring up the ancor! Good we did'nt put down the Sail.... wait
a sec! how did the marines not find the ship? wow they must be
real idoits to not see it!"

There ship starts out to sea. When they look at the dock to see
the marine captain yelling at his fellow marines. "Sir we can still
go after them if you want?" a marine said. " No there already to
far... lets go back to the marine headquarters. you blasted Serti!"

"Yes we got away! And I got food for us!" Serti screamed.
"Now to the next island BattleShip island!


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#10 2007-08-03 07:11:16

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

The ship bounced on the waves of the storm. Thunder all over the place, they needed to land somewhere, that some where was the little known Battleship Island. The two men had to fight against the storm, if they gave the storm an inch it could destroy them. They finally landed on the island with a not so warm welcome.

"The dragon isn't here pirates, beat it. We don't want any trouble, so leave now!" yelled an angry old villager holding again like the rest of his villagers.

"Whoa we come in peace!" yelled Dell, "we're running from the enemy they're gonna kill you! You peds better run!" he leaned to Serti and whispered into his ear, "Peds are pedestrians,"

"I know,"


Brother: opens pepsi bottle, looks at top, "Oh man, I'm a loser!"
Dad: "You don't need a pepsi bottle to figure that out,"

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#11 2007-08-03 10:56:58

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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

Finally Kargo stops studying the rocks noticing that the 2 fellows left him. He starts walking to find food and a boat.

*Kargo Looks around* Suddenly he yell *YEAH!* With great pride he managed to reach the boat, and he also manage to find the sail in the boat, and so he starts his adventure.

Suddenly after a long trip he saw a island he was starving.  Kargo saw some banana trees in front of him. He rushed to the trees  finally he reached the tree and started climbing one of then getting 25 pieces of banana.
he though *I need a sack to carried these bananas with me.

He starts for clothes, finally he sees 2 shirts on the floor he says *Finally I can make a sack* Kargo starts cutting the shirts into 2 pieces he manage to found some sewing materials in the shirt * he starts sewing the half pieces to make a sack* he managed to completed the sack, and places the bananas in there, and gets one to eat it.

He starts looking for a town and he saw some kids running in these directions. Kargo hides while moving forward into the town. he finally reached the town and starts looking for a tavern. *looks around*

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#12 2007-08-03 14:35:08

Korten
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Re: One Piece: Legend of the island Gemena

"We dont want to hurt anyone" serti said as he jumps off the boat.
Del also jumped off the boat. "Were just here because of this strom"
A villager screamed at them "After This strom we want you to leave
this island!" Serti step back a little "we will but did something happen
here?"

"Thats none of your concern you lowlife pirates!"
"But people can you just tell me what happen and we will leave as
soon as we can." Serti said as he stepped foward.
"Fine well tell you... one week ago a pirate crew named Masuh come
her-" Serti fell on to the ground... "Did you just say Masuh!"
"yes I just did why?" Serti slowly got back up "He killed my parents and
almost my whole village 6 years ago... My parents sacrafices them selves
so Masuh wouldnt kill me. in the village of Vegao on the island of Gemena."
The villager said "Gemena? that island is real!?"

"yes it is real." Serti said. "we all thought it was just a legend!"
the villager said. "Its 100% true and can we continue with what
masuh did here." Serti said. "yes and I was saying Masuh came
here wanting the a dragon to make the potion of internal life.
but the dragons all ready have left and wont come back for a
long time. after we told him that he said "tell them to come back!"
we said to him they wont he attacked out town and almost burnt it
to  the ground..."  The villager told them.

"That bastard Masuh is there any place we can stay for the night?"
Serti said. "yes this way follow me." Serti and Del followed the villager.
"Thank you for letting us stay here." Del told them the villager.

"Del im going to go to bed your room is that room over there" Serti told him.
"yes Captain Sertu" Del said. Serti didnt say anything and just went to his room.


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