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Name: Urateke Yake
Gender: Male
Role: Cook
Age: 35
Combat: tsuitouryu or twin dagger style
Physical specs: Height: 6’2” Weight: 90 kilos Build: a rather small figure, but every piece of his body looks well trained

Appearance:
Yake has dark blue hair falling from the sides of his head till the height of his eyes with a few locks at his forehead. Blue eyes and a scar from his left ear till his left shoulder defines his face. Around his neck he has a gold necklace with a heart-shaped hanger with a photo of his son in it.  He wears a dark brown coat and under that a white shirt. He also has some black pants and shoes. At first he may look a rather old, worn out man, but if you look closely his eyes and facial expressions represents the youth and vitality of a twenty year old.

Background:
In the north of the city Kuita, a nice and peacefull town, the only town of Yakuza, an island somewhat east from Toraki Island, lays a restaurant named Urateke Hyakumi. It is a very popular restaurant and people from all South Blue visit it. The main succes come from the two owners, a couple named Yaro and Iris. They are the greatest cooks of South Blue and maybe even beyond. They have a son named Yake, a rather lazy and silent boy. Although he posseses the skill to become even a better cook than his mom and dad, all he does is reading about pirates and messing around in the kitchen. Apart from that, they have a normal life. Yake grows tall and tender, just like his father.
It was when he woke up at his eighteenth birhday, that his life took a change. He came down looking for father and mother, but they weren’t there. “They must be still in bed, they had a long day yesterday.” Yake walked up again to his parents bedroom. But nobody was there. Yake looked everywhere in the house, he even checked the restaurant, but he couldn’t find them. Not even the townelder knew where Yaro and Iris where. After checking the whole island and not finding any clue, not even a boat missing, he laid in bed for a whole week, thinking about what he must do now. He decided to continue with the restaurant, hoping that his parent come home one day. That was just hope.
It was hard work for Yake, who hadn’t done anything in his life. But he managed to do it somehow and the old status of the Urateke Hyakumi stayed intact. He even fell in love with one of the waitresses, Yame and they married. When Yake was twenty, Yame suddenly died due to an ilness. Yake was sad for one part, but happy on the other, because Yame left Yake a wonderfull gift her last day: a boy. It was at the time that Yake had grown a lot, not physically but for the most part mentally. Due to the hard work he had become a lot more mature and he he devoured a lot of books. He had gained a large pack of nature’s intelligence, but still he was the silent, sober one. Only the smile of his son, Yaro, made him smile. Yake spend as much time as he had with Yaro and the boy grew up just like his mother, the happy and adventurous type. He always asked why his father could cook so well and the answer was every time the same. “Before I met your mother,” Yake explained, “I was the head cook of the pirateking Gol D. Rodger. I learned the cook from the best cooks all over the entire Grand Line. His fleet was enormous and it was hard work on the ship. Not only by preparing diner for more than 1000 men, even the cook must fight in battle. As a cook of the pirateking I eventually gained a 150.000.000 belli bounty. But than I met your mother and retired.” “Can I also become a great cook and pirate like you, father?” the boy asked. “Sure you can, as long as you do your best and try hard,” said Yake as he caressed the boys head.
Yake was visiting the grave of his wife one day. Yaro had become 11 just yesterday. Yake laid down some flowers at the grave on top of a cliff, when he Yaro boarding a small ship alone on the beach below the cliff. Yake hesitated not one moment and ran for the boy. By the time he got there, Yaro’s boat already drifted in the open sea. He could only listen to the last words of his son. “I’m going to look for a pirateship and become a great cook and pirate with a bounty even higher than yours, daddy! Byeee!”
Yake shouted to retrieve his son, calling up the dangers of the sea, but his words wouldn’t reach the boy. He eventually jumped into the sea, but when he was only 3 yards from the shore, a seaking rose from the surface and ate the small boat together with the boy.
The next day the villagers found the Urateke Hyakumi closed. Yake had run into the forest, crying so loud his eyes almost burst. His greeves of pain were heared trough the entire island. He wanted himself never to come in contact with any human again, because they all would die sooner or later if the stayed with him. And so Yake lived three years in the forest, just surviving with his cooking knives and his will.
After those three years, Yake finally regained his old, calm self again and left the forest, but there was one great difference with him before. He had a dream, a life goal, to fulfill the dreams of his late son and to become the cook of great pirateship and to gain a 150.000.000 belli bounty! With that in his mind Yake boarded a mercendary ship from Yakuza that was headed for Toraki Island.   

Combat relevant info:
Together his cooking skills and survival training, Yake learned himself a twin dagger style, the tsuitouryu he called it. During the three years he discoverd that he had a great figting speed, almost if it were in his genes. He found himself as fast that he could attack any animal head on in an open field, without it even knowing that it was attacked. Apart from his speed he lacks raw strenght and a strong body.

Tsuitouryu styles:
Issen tantou: Yake attacks with his knives forward so fast that it looks like he wields a dozen more daggers

Haishitsu shibireru: an attacked that allows Yake to disable the arms and legs of his opponent with one strike

Kyoudan: moves Yake behind the opponent, leaving him open for an attack

Kokudo tantou: Yake circles around his oppenent as fast as he can and suddenly he throws daggers from all directions at his opponent

These are just a few attacks, but Yake will learn more in the future

Personal info:
Yake is at the start of a very distant type, he won’t let anyone get close to him. This makes him sometimes looks rude, but Yake knows that’s for the best. But deep in his heart, Yake wants to have nakama, if its only to not think al the time about the one he already lost. He is a calm thinker with quick at analysing situations and solving problems. Being in the nature for so long, he had developed great respect for all what lives in the wild, except one fiercefull creature: the seakings. When he left the forest he made himself another promise. If he had someone to love, care for again, he would never loose them again. He lives for the dream of his son and he would do anything to make it make it come true. With his hanger with a picture of his son in it, which he values a his only treasure he sets out to the sea, to accomplise his dreams and sometimes with the slightest hope to discover what happened to his parents.

Last edited by Valeron (2006-06-03 04:23:20)

Hey I just aspired as 1st mate for Omars crew, can I join urs too?
Is it possible joining two crews as a different character?
If you'll approve me I'll send in my character to you.

I have absolutely no ideas for a new intresting chracter right now.
Dang.

Okay I decided to post my character whether u let him join or not

Name: Olleine Adrirene
Male
SlaveSoldier
Age: 20
Combat: Just stands there waiting for his opponents to attack. His hands are able to grab to any attacker with lightning speed, then never lets go of his grip. Bones will be broken as he grabs onto anybody with the strong clinching of his hands. Attack style is standing tall and straight like a statue while while delivering kicks and punches that are always on the defense.
Height- 6'4'', Weight- 140- Muscular build with a "V" shaped torso.

Appearance: Wears a marine uniform, sometimes with the cap on. His hair is colored gold with normal hair length and is combed in a neat military manner all the way from the front to the back. His expression is always blank and snappy, much more of a soldier than a pirate. When he rests he does not sit down but stands there doing nothing, watching at the sea. Appears very well dressed for a pirate.
Background: Olleine was the son of a General and a High Ranking Secretary working for the world goverment. He was trained with the same techniques the CP9 had. His father and his mother paid more than a hundred million berries for his training to develop to him the skills that were similar to the CP9. But Olleine was not a kid fitted to be a soldier of the World Goverment, he always failed many times in the training. He was only able to master 2 of the CP9's fighting arts; the shigan (bullet finger) and the tekkai (makes you hard as iron). Still his father insisted him to continue the training on and on, they paid another one hundred million berries for him to master the ryankaku (slashing technique) but Olleine was unable to master it, the slash made by the ryankaku was not a slash it would be a blow. Olleine by the way was already satisfied with these 3 skills that he had, but still his parents strived more to make him be a great soldier of the World Government. His parents loved him by the way they gave him good food, good house, good toys, good things, good girls and good military training, but because of their so much love for Olleine Olleine got spoiled and became selfish. One day when he and his parents were having a vacation on their ship  they were raided by a pirate known as "Alleane the Terrible(see my post in RP if you wanna know who Alleane is)". Alleane the crew of his parents ship and stole all the goods they were carrying. His parents begged that Alleane would spare their lives. But Olleiene knew that Alleane was a terrbileunforgiving monster of the seas who delighted in bloodshed, so he tried to fight Alleane using the three arts that he knew. Olleine lost by the way, Alleane had too many soldiers and Olleine was outnumbered. Alleane loved the way Olleine fought, and he was surprised that the 10 year old boy was able to put on a show and kill more than a hundred of his troops. He told the Olleine that he would spare his life if Olleine joined him in his quest for bloodshed, Olleine becoz he did not want to die gladly joined Alleane's crew, but a sacrifice was made. In order to show his loyalty to Alleane he had to kill his parents. Olleiene with shaking hands killed his own parents in his hands. Then after he went to Alleane's ship and started raiding many ships. Olleines life became very sucessfull and great as he joined Alleanes crew. Alleane even let him eat a Devil Fruit known as the Oni Oni Fruit (Zoan Type Fruit that transform the person into a demon). Olleine had many nightmares everynight due to the great sins that he had done. One day when Alleane was raiding a marine ship Olleane saw two people both a man and a woman begging for their lives to the great Alleane, and their 8 year old helpless son tried to fight Alleane. Olleane remembered the times of what he had done to his parents the day he joined Allean, he defended the family. Alleane was furious and gave accusations that Olleiene was a mutineer. Olleine was then attacked by his own crewmates. Alleane emerged victorious and killed everybody on the ship including Olleine. But little did he knew that Olleine had survived. Olleine's heart was broken from the carnage that he saw when he woke up in a broken plank of ship debris. He vowed that he would kill Alleane one day and promote justice in the world. He tried to return to the marines but he already had a bounty on his head of 60 million berries. And that's where our story starts....

Combat Info: His unarmed combat is more likely in defense and grips of death by his hands. Using his tekkai he is like a tank who can stand to any attacks given to him.

Abilities: Tekkai
                Shigan
                Buromye - This is the lesser evolution of the ryankaku, it is unable to make a slice but is able to create an invisible long ranged blow.
                Devil Fruit Oni Oni Fruit (Zoan Type): Transforms him into an invincible demon with claws as hard as steel and is able to bring fear and sometimes death to everything that comes in his wake.

Personality/quirks/goals: He is a person who has a very serious look always. He likes to be very well groomed everyday. He keeps a conversation sometimes, sometimes he smiles from jokes of others but never laughs (only a small smile). He's everyday chores are doing push-ups, punching the air to improve his Buromye skill, doing sit-ups, helping the captain in all commands the captain does. Normally what he does is obey the captains command without hesitation like cleaning the deck, washing the plates and stuff.
Eats very fast (in the military)
His goal is to kill Alleane and bring justice into the world(If it's possible, he's such a kid). Since the marines won't accept him coz of his bounty he joined a pirate crew instead.
He does not like conversing with many people, and most likely what he does is keep watch and minds everybody's privacy.

I guess I should have mentioned this during the first post; I don't want the characters to have any connections to the grand line pre-play.

And lorenzo: Your character is way too powerful, re-think it in the lines of the power levels presented in the Buggy arc. Also, I as a game-master would never allow a starting character to even know about the existence of the CP9, much less know about their fighting styles. The characters are supposed to be fairly new to the game, and few even know how to GET to the grand line.

And what is a Slave soldier? And by watchman, I presume you mean look-out?

I want the characters to develop during play, learn new skills and abilities as they go along. If people want to play combat-monsters, please realize that by playing a super-hero, you ruin the fun for everyone. If I balance fights to suit the other players, then the monster would trounce stuff. And if I balance fights to suit the super-hero, then the other players won't be able to do anything. Having Son Goku among the straw-hats would pretty much ruin the fights in the show.

Basicly, if a character could defeat Zoro or Luffy at their power-levels in Arlong Park, then it's too powerful. And I demand that power-houses have weaknesses to compensate. If you don't submit any, then I will create them for you.

I won't make any final decisions on who gets to join before we have enough characters to fill the crew.

Okay I'm going to change my character, so here goes. He aint gonna be too powerful or too weak. And for other people who reads this post, kindly ignore the one i made before.

Name: Olleine Adrirene
Male
Watchman
Age: 20
Combat: Whenever fighting against somebody he always uses smoke grenades (Carbon Coroxide (iMADE THAT UP)) to cover himself, little does his enemies know that there is poison on the smoke grenades that he throws and that he is immune to the smokes poison (It's coz their bloodline has gotten used to the poison of Carbon Coroxide) Please take note that 4ml of Carbon Coroxide(that shudn't be too powerful enough) is able to kill or not paralyze a normal human being. Also while there is smoke created by the CarbonCoroxide the enemy can't see and then he uses his gasmask that he always hides in his cloak as means of vision to sneak into the enemy from behind and backstab them using a very poisonous dagger. He has many daggers hidden in his cloak and all of them are stained with poison. He just uses brute strength to battle with his enemies. And if he cannot beat them, he sometimes cheat and pulls of some tricky things like traps and cantrips to beat his enemy. He always run around while he battles. Little does his enemies know is that he is springing a trap for them.
Height- 5'11'', Weight- 130- Muscular build with a "V" shaped torso.

Appearance: Wears a red robe that has a hood, he would always be seen wearing the hood on his head and his gasmask on (I will explain it why later). His hair is black and is slightly long coz it runs down to his neck. He has a pair of leather gloves and leather boots that he uses to hide his sneaky weapons. His skin looks pale white and he looks more of a crazed ghost who had been frozen in Antartica for weeks. He bears a very wicked face because of his eyes that are very sharp and because of his big wicked grin that he always carry during conversations.
Background: Olleiene belonged to a famous clan from the Icy parts of the world (not in the grand line). Their clan was very famous because they exhaled different gasses than normal human beings. Instead of exhaling carbondioxide they exhaled carboncoroxide which is extremely poisonous to normal human beings. It is strange however that they are able to survive with this gas. One day a fearful pirate known as Alleane the Terrible (You can see it on my story on RP) went to raid their known clan. Alleane the Terrible was able to destroy their entire village, but because of the carboncoroxides effects Alleane was marvelled by the power of Olleines clan, Alleane lost hundreds of his troops in the battle against Olleienes clan, and so he recruited the clan as his slave troops. With their dangerous breath they are able to wreak havoc and terror in the seas. Olleiene was very young that time and most of Olleienes life he had spent were not in his village but in Alleane's ship. There was one time when Alleane raided a marine ship known as the "Forever" and lost countless troops in the battle. Olleine was only 15 that time and it was the first time that his skills in training with Alleane were to be proven. Olleine battled with the marines but he was badly wounded and was considered dead by Alleane. Alleane soon became victorious. He then went away with the goods he had stolen and left his dead soldiers in the sinking ship of the "Forever" including Olleiene. When Olleine woke up he found himself ashore on an island known as the.... (And That's where our story starts)

Combat Info: He uses trickiness and springs traps all the time to battle against his opponents. He keeps a handful of weapons on his robes including; strings to create traps, bombs, gasgrenades, poisonous daggers and a marine modeled rifle on his hands. (He also carries a backpack which is filled with many explosives and bottles filleds with poisons)

Abilities/Combat Styles: CarbonCoroxide Smoke: This is usually the first thing that he does in a battle, to make him invisible from the enemy and to poison them.
                                           Daggers of Many Poison: It is said that two drops of the poison on this dagger is able to make an Elephant be paralyzed. Four=death. He has thirteen daggers all in all and each of them having different kinds of poison. He has the antidotes of the poison on his backpack.
                                            Rifle: With this rifle he is able to snipe his enemies in the carboncoroxide smoke from a great distance.
                                            Bombs: Should i really have to elaborate this
                                            Flashbang: Yeah i suppose you all play CS

Personality/quirks/goals: He looks very freaky because he always wears a gasmask on. But there's more to him than meets the eye. Death results to anyone who sees his whole face. That's coz he would be taking out his gasmask and when he removes it and breathe people would die.
He eats by removing his mask of course, but his crew need not have t worry. Olleine is able to hold his breath for more than 20 minutes, which is the maximum time that he shows his face in full, after that he then puts his gasmask back to his face once again.
I did say there is more to him that meets the eye, that's coz he's a pervert. And everytime no one is looking (not that anybody would suspect coz of his gasmask/He's gasmask has goggles included by the way) he rolls his eyeballls to his side always and looks at women.
People who sees his face think of him as a real lunatic coz of his pale white skin.
His goal in life is to find Alleane and return to his service. He still does not know that Alleane is very evil and brutal, he does not like murder and bloodshed despite of his maniacal behavior.
He wears a demonic laugh whenever they talk.
He does not talk with his gasmask off.

Well my character was once a pirate too. He was trained by the nefarious Alleane, and it is expected that he knows many things as a crew in a ship already. Not that watchman is that bad I believe. But my character believes that watchman is the easiest job for him, since he is afraid of responsibilities held by other positions.

So what's going to be your role in this Crimson? If your not going to make a character, you going to be like a DM in D&D that sort of hovers the story over our heads or something?

So does that mean i'm in?

Um, thats alright, I don't think I'll be in that one for a while. But if you wanted to ask me that, you could have jjust asked in a pm.

Random: Impatient much? *Thumb's up* Your character meets my parameters, and seems interesting as well as balanced, keep it coming storywise.

Okami: Yeah, I'm gonna be the storyteller, and play just about everyone else. Thus, I won't make a character that is "mine" per se.

As of now, the characters seems OK, but again, I won't make decisions based on the order of submits.

The main reason for this is I want good well-rounded thought-out characters, played by mature players. The more thought you invest in making the character, the greater are your chances on getting in.

I'll try to check in on this thread at least twice later today. I must admit that I have discovered Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion, and sorta got hooked. If I am not here, blame Bethesda Software

Oh, by the way: I would appreciate suggestions on plot-hooks for character development (inspiriational/motivational issues, mental barriers you need to overcome to grow stronger etc). And notes on what you DON'T want to go through. (Romantic interests may not be everyone's cup of tea)

Then you PM